The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rel

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat
by Asia, Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000. Summarise
the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons
where relevant.

The given three pie charts depict the data about the production and consumption of coffee worldwide and give information about the distribution of its profits in different sectors.

Overall, South Africa is the largest producer of coffee, while Europe is the largest consumer. It is also evident that most of the profit goes to the delivery sector.

South Africa produces 44% of the world coffee, the largest, while its coffee consumption is marginal. The second largest contributor to the world's coffee production is Indonesia, which stands at 22%. The percentage of Coffee production in Vietnam and Japan are close to each other. Its figures stand at 16% and 18%, respectively.

Europe and America consume a substantial percentage(80%) of world coffee production with individual figures 41% and 39%, respectively. By contrast, Japan coffee import percentage is a mere 8%, while the rest of the world consumes 12% of the world coffee production.

It is interesting to note that the delivery sector takes more than half of the profit while retailers, exporters, and producers get 24%, 10%, and 15%, respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
.... The second largest contributor to the worlds coffee production is Indonesia, which s...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30898876404 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89561374622 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556179775281 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4158597521 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128002865166 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561214405464 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469858348352 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641854967965 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555272974036 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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