Nowadays most developing countries receive financial aid from international organizations. However, many people believe that help in a form of advice and skills is more important and useful than money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In present days, some management proposes economical help to developing nations however some countries need guidance and talent rather than financial support. This essay shall look into both sides of the argument before coming to a conclusion.
There are many reasons why some cities require economical help. Firstly, monetary assistance is valuable for basic amenities. Nations believe that essential aids such as roads, railways, and buildings should be fulfilled with the help of the required cost. As a result, countries might improve living standards with foreign economical aid where it would be developed with the best amenities. Secondly, in this fast pace life, external affairs are useful for industries and schools in poorer societies. Because of cutthroat competition, every developing society has to depend on external factors for a good education in the schools as well as reduce unemployment. Consequently, it may affect the country's booming outsourcing industry.
On the other hand, many individuals opine that proper suggestions become more important for developing cities. When money is offered by international affairs, it can be developed good amenities however if assistance is proposed by an adequate advisor, then societies would be improved with healthier growth. Thus, international experts may helpful for practical assistance and effective development. Moreover, in this digital world, technical knowledge is a must for developing nations. Admittedly, programmatic skill is the essential element for perfect plans which is cultivated for delicate matters and execute a productive plan. Owing to that, profound proficiency will assist in enormous development.
In conclusion, in my opinion, profitable assistance, as well as practical and advice aid, is equally important. Furthermore, if programs and suggestions are inculcated, then foreign economics also matters for the desired outcome. So, developing countries can achieve better living standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required cost" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'cost' or 'to be cost'.
Suggestion: cost; to be cost
...fulfilled with the help of the required cost. As a result, countries might improve l...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t improve living standards with foreign economical aid where it would be developed with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86206896552 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01372997646 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658620689655 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0738398898 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7222222222 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187007799934 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521932991952 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388120979543 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109556155095 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139399236379 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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