Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Few years recently, shopping malls are becoming increasingly common, especially in cities. This arouses two different opinions - are large shopping malls are good or bad. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument and after that I will give my opinion.
The major reason that people are preferring malls is the convenience of getting our daily needs including groceries, clothes, shoes, books etc under one roof along with cinemas and entertainment arcades making it a one-stop solution. As well as services in large shopping centers often have more choices and are also more professional than small stores.When people are getting busier and less time to shop, shopping mall is their best choice. Moreover, because it's a complex, people can send their children in the play area to be more comfortable choosing things.
Regardless of their endless advantages, they still have some disadvantages. When people see the variety of products, they are stimulated to buy more at the mall, even if some purchases are needless. Of course, the development of shopping malls means less benefits for owners of small shop and small local businesses. In addition, many small shops may have to close and lead to more people being unemployed. In fact, there are some people who just want to buy a few things such as a bottle of water, a pack of cigarettes, etc., it is more convenient to visit the small roadside shops.
In conclusion, the big shopping malls have their advantages, but the disappearance of the small stores causes an imbalance in the economy that outweighs their advantages and therefore I believe that the shopping malls Big shopping should not replace small stores.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: When
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...is their best choice. Moreover, because its a complex, people can send their childr...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun benefits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t to visit the small roadside shops. In conclusion, the big shopping malls have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07885304659 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71168813676 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5866034314 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327041719784 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124373635283 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122343753679 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212821699886 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535535241661 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.