In this modern era, there are several ways from where people can easily get news. Such as, newspaper, magazine and social media. Whereas , few people are in the favour of newspapers but, others give emphasis on internet . In my ideology, both methods are equally mandatory for getting relevant information.
Initiating with innumerable positive consequences of reading news from newspaper.The cordinal point is to be considered that newspapers are very beneficial for those who are not able use electronic gadgets like mobile phone, laptop and so no . So, people considered it is a convenient and easiest way to get real information. Moreover, second valid point is newspaper always provide a genuine news because every information is inspected by official ones before printing . Therefore, most of the students and literate people considered it is an appropriate aspects which provide a realistic news .
Considerably , there are abundant of reasons why people choose internet to make themselves up-to date. Because online media is a fastest and easiest way to get information with in a minute. As, every single person has there own mobile phone . They can easily get news at any time or at any place. Thus , new generation give more preference to online media. In addition to this, nowadays every individual are workaholic So, they do not have sufficient time to read a newspaper. Thus, they keep their eyes on using internet to get news which helps to make them up-to-dated and relate with current affairs.
To recapitulate, although getting news from newspaper is a old age trend and it is prominent way which is mostly preferable by elder ones. Meanwhile, there are also uncountable fruitful results of reading news through online which cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24381625442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85275944312 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9783309877 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2941176471 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187963332857 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641623733821 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463303849809 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121017558595 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612739589359 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.