Some people assert that it is good for students to have part time job.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, working with studies is better for learners. I largely agree with this perspective because part time jobs have many benefits to students.
On the one hand, there are many reason of disagreement. Firstly, learners can gain work experience. To be more precise, if students start working part time along with their studies in their early then they can attain a lot of knowledge related to their work. Resultantly, it increases the students experience which is beneficial for them while they are seeking for jobs in future. Furthermore, learners become self dependent. To elaborate, by doing work in student life they can earn some money which help them to afford their daily expenditures such as buying books, internet packs and so on. Thus, students can manage their expensives by own.
In contrast, part time jobs also have negative impacts. The predominant one is that it can reduce the concentration of learners from studies. In other words, nowadays academic syllabus of a studies are increased at such a level that students cannot manage time to play games and for other recreational activities. So, if they started working in student life then they cannot focus on studies. Hence, part time jobs are the major factor of reducing concentration of learners from studies.
To conclude, although learners cannot give much importance to their studies by doing part time jobs, but, I think its benefits like making students self dependent and giving them work experience outweigh the negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, thus, while, i think, in contrast, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21224489796 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6965354853 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7314250581 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226170425605 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794380339046 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701618099278 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149795539372 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360114235428 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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