A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Irrefutably, that animals are very important for maintaining an ecosystem we cannot imagine without animals, increasing proportion of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people because they have also the same rights to do anything like humans. However, others opine that humans immensely employ animals to satisfy their different needs including all uses for food products and research methodology. In my opinion, animals are very important for ourselves and agricultural resources.
On the one hand, there are a lot of predominant reasons, and many people argue that humans should refrain from exploiting animals. In my opinion, humans should not hunt or kills animals for pleasure. also, they should not mistreat by creating a hostile living environment for them. for instance, in this modern era plethora of people keep animals in their farms and home also zoos because of security so it can negatively impact the human's life and it also affects the ecosystem chain.
On the other hand, it is impossible to imagine life without animals because animals are an indispensable role in everyone's life. Animals provide abundant resources for humans. Moreover, human beings use many products related to animals such as milk and butter all Milk products, medicine nutrition food, not only in terms of products but animals are widely used for transportation. In addition to these ample of farmers depend on animals they fulfill their needs not only but also it is an important part of agriculture slide. for example, immensely employee depends on animals and increased economic level with help of animals.
In recapitulation, I certainly believe, that animals are a very important part of our life it is a very crucial role for ecosystem chain as well as agriculture side.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... a hostile living environment for them. for instance, in this modern era plethora o...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ecurity so it can negatively impact the humans life and it also affects the ecosystem ...
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Suggestion: For
...an important part of agriculture slide. for example, immensely employee depends on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22996515679 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75875467136 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1548964596 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452446572004 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162818274594 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904064926651 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271915076942 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15022185894 0.056905535591 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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