There is a shortage of housing in many countries and this can lead to severe social consequences. Only government can solve this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A tranquil resident is a fundamental human right in the context of global social development progress. House issues have stumbled in a large number of countries whether can lead to acutely social challenging or the authority could mitigate the citizen living location allowing unauthorized land. In this essay, I would articulate a valid standards point relating to the agreement aspect regarding residential places in the subsequent paragraphs.
Currently, a social dwelling demand growing due to urbanization and economic development purposes. So there are a large number of civilians expected their sound living area although a few nongovernmental organization has provided residential spaces. They are assisted financial aid towards the lower-income sources of people who are living below the poverty line. Another middle category dwellers have lived in the metropolitan area where are not sufficient standard citizen facilities.
The government must enact a law which is called the citizen character that bears human rights including their duties and responsibilities. The Authority may provide some of the free lands to the destitute people because such land has occupied political miscreants for a long time. It takes real advancement and attainment not only the destitute people but also middle classes families.
However, without urbanization, a city can not be build-up appropriately to avail of citizen benefits. The government and nonprofit role-playing authority make a sustainable dwell planning to free from living emancipation. Small and medium industry-based owners should establish a mega project for their employees who are working under their environment. Separation of chief executive secretary office from nadir to apex body including their housing facilities.
Providing housing loans among the employee and lower-income people for the aims of resident structure.
To sum up, assurance of house building and their safety is the most relentless demand both lowest classes and ideal citizen. Sounds and the well-established nation would not be set up until the citizen right may appear as they demand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...progress. House issues have stumbled in a large number of countries whether can lead to acutely s...
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Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'standard'?
Suggestion: standard
... this essay, I would articulate a valid standards point relating to the agreement aspect ...
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Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...omic development purposes. So there are a large number of civilians expected their sound living a...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...onsibilities. The Authority may provide some of the free lands to the destitute people beca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, regarding, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69811320755 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11080524809 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638364779874 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9215846994 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100149447687 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291954717974 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347414132661 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491014673577 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479788124745 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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