Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you a photo of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter.
Thank them for photos and for the holiday
Explain why you did not write earlier
Invite them come to stay with you
Dear, X 06, June 2020
I am writing to express my warm-hearted thank for your photo sending that is being taken from some of my friends for the celebration of 31st curniaval festival last year located at Rio in Brazil.
However, some ever moment photos had taken one of my friend which did not full fill my archived of desire. Even though, long cycle riding still photos accompanied by myself capturing moving camera, it was not perfect angle clicking. Anyway, flower festival display photos of this carnival we uplift glorious moment where all of our friends still stand to create motto name ‘Friends forever’ that made our family bondage.
Although, I had received your mail and hard copy from Fedex Courier services last two months ago but I could not inform you as thank letter because of my recent career interview. You are hilarious to know that I have joined here as a management employee position which has a magnificent task from my childhoods.
So what, you are my blossom friend, please do not mind crucially for my indifference. I am requested to you kindly visit my home country and stay at your favorable period. It refers that my native country is the most natural beautiful country, their landslide view is charming to you as like as nature made carnival that you watch and observed from your core of heart.
I hope, you will visit my homeland as soon as possible. I express thank again to you and wishes better life with your family.
Your loving friend.
Z
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear, X 06, June 2020 I am writing to express m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45708310327 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6050875145 44.8134815571 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352437658369 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136367730852 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560425532375 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157403712886 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776070296042 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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