in the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless the only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers do you think advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages
It is considered by many researches, technology is booning along with time ,therefore it thinks that in upcoming years most of the vehicles will not have drivers due to which only passengers would travel in automobiles .According to me ,this phenomenon has more advantages which outrace its disadvantages
On the one hand ,the predominant drawback of driverless cars is that it upsurges unemployment rate .To be more precise, if cars or trucks would be driven by computers then drivers who are doing work in transport industry will be jobless. The bad repercussion comes from it that it may decrease unemployment and jobless people can do something illegal for their survival.
On the other hand there are multifarious benefits of auto working vehicle .To begin with ,it alleviates traffic accidents indeed computers and sensors work well then human even human being can do error but computer not to add on it at enormous vehicle cannot distract not only this but also reliable to take current decisions .Thus , these kind of innovatio will decrese road injuries .
Another advantage of this development is it loses the traffic congestions .To explain, by scrutinizing traffic flooded paths, computerized vehicle could alter their routes or can change their speed while acrossing from jam roads .Resultantly, traffic issues will be solved and directly preserve the environment.
In conclusion ,although selfdrive transportations will cause joblessness ,but also it has numerous advantages such as overcoming traffic issues and rise in road safety .So, advantages exceed than disadvantages.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45967741935 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98423591561 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681451612903 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.146638102 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.8 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313137114321 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14052366601 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974335904599 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147679922769 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534177063112 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.0946893788 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s, technology is booning along with time ,therefore it thinks that in upcoming yea...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y passengers would travel in automobiles .According to me ,this phenomenon has mor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...passengers would travel in automobiles .According to me ,this phenomenon has more advanta...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...passengers would travel in automobiles .According to me ,this phenomenon has more advantages wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d travel in automobiles .According to me ,this phenomenon has more advantages whic...
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...ace its disadvantages On the one hand ,the predominant drawback of driverless c...
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...rs is that it upsurges unemployment rate .To be more precise, if cars or trucks wo...
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... is that it upsurges unemployment rate .To be more precise, if cars or trucks woul...
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...farious benefits of auto working vehicle .To begin with ,it alleviates traffic acc...
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...rious benefits of auto working vehicle .To begin with ,it alleviates traffic accid...
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...s of auto working vehicle .To begin with ,it alleviates traffic accidents indeed c...
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... also reliable to take current decisions .Thus , these kind of innovatio will decr...
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...lso reliable to take current decisions .Thus , these kind of innovatio will decrese ...
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...reliable to take current decisions .Thus , these kind of innovatio will decrese ro...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...iable to take current decisions .Thus , these kind of innovatio will decrese road injuries...
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... of innovatio will decrese road injuries . Another advantage of this development ...
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...ment is it loses the traffic congestions .To explain, by scrutinizing traffic floo...
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...nt is it loses the traffic congestions .To explain, by scrutinizing traffic floode...
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...eir speed while acrossing from jam roads .Resultantly, traffic issues will be solv...
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...r speed while acrossing from jam roads .Resultantly, traffic issues will be solved and dire...
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Suggestion: ,
...eserve the environment. In conclusion ,although selfdrive transportations will ...
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Suggestion: ,
...e transportations will cause joblessness ,but also it has numerous advantages such...
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...g traffic issues and rise in road safety .So, advantages exceed than disadvantages...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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...traffic issues and rise in road safety .So, advantages exceed than disadvantages. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45967741935 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98423591561 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681451612903 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.146638102 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.8 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313137114321 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14052366601 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974335904599 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147679922769 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534177063112 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.0946893788 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.