Full time University students spend most of time in studing they should do other activities too .
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is considered by many individuals that learners who are in tertiary level of education and studying around the clock ,they ought to indulge in recreational activities.i am strongly accord with this statement because it handovers umpteen benefits to students.
On the one hand , multifarious advantages can be seen if university learners do other activities after studying time.At the outset ,it eliminates the mental breakdown.To be more precise,by doing consistent study , majority of time learners feel monotonous along with it .they also face stress and anxiety about their academic work .If students play games or do any leisure activity ,then it would ensure to destress their mind .Resultantly , concentration level can be risen during study .What is more, it is helpful way to grab some paramount ethical value about worldliness .for illustration, bountiful sports and group activities impart enlightment regarding to coordination , cooperation , decision making and leadership skill which are considered immense significant in well personality .So, students must do free time activities.
On the other hand,the predominant drawback of participating in unacademic program in free time for University scholars, it sitbacks them from studies .it is evident, the pressure of study is directly proportional to level of education.Undeniably, tertiary students have to spend excessive time to finish their academic tasks.if they do any other activity instead of study in spare time, then definiately their time schedule would be fluctuated ,which put adverse effect on study performance .
To conclusion, although education is pivotol part of life so students should focus on it , but other recreational activities also allot numerous benefits to learners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aramount ethical value about worldliness .for illustration, bountiful sports and g...
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...rt enlightment regarding to coordination , cooperation , decision making and leade...
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...ee time activities. On the other hand,the predominant drawback of participating i...
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...ctly proportional to level of education.Undeniably, tertiary students have to spend excess...
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... their time schedule would be fluctuated ,which put adverse effect on study perfor...
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... put adverse effect on study performance . To conclusion, although education is...
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...t of life so students should focus on it , but other recreational activities also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, well, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74427480916 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21642768554 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671755725191 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 258.18150108 49.4020404114 523% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 376.25 106.682146367 353% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288078696147 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15305355237 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942524804965 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15305355237 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942524804965 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.4 13.0946893788 293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.98 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... education and studying around the clock ,they ought to indulge in recreational ac...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t to indulge in recreational activities.i am strongly accord with this statement ...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accorded'.
Suggestion: accorded
...n recreational activities.i am strongly accord with this statement because it handover...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...benefits to students. On the one hand , multifarious advantages can be seen if ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...do other activities after studying time.At the outset ,it eliminates the mental br...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...vities after studying time.At the outset ,it eliminates the mental breakdown.To be...
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Suggestion: To
...set ,it eliminates the mental breakdown.To be more precise,by doing consistent stu...
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Suggestion: , by
... the mental breakdown.To be more precise,by doing consistent study , majority of ti...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e more precise,by doing consistent study , majority of time learners feel monotono...
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Suggestion: .
...e learners feel monotonous along with it .they also face stress and anxiety about ...
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Suggestion: .
...ss and anxiety about their academic work .If students play games or do any leisure...
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Suggestion: If
... and anxiety about their academic work .If students play games or do any leisure a...
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...ts play games or do any leisure activity ,then it would ensure to destress their ...
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...ames or do any leisure activity ,then it would ensure to destress their mind .Res...
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... it would ensure to destress their mind .Resultantly , concentration level can be...
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...t would ensure to destress their mind .Resultantly , concentration level can be risen duri...
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Suggestion: ,
...sure to destress their mind .Resultantly , concentration level can be risen during...
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...ntration level can be risen during study .What is more, it is helpful way to grab ...
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Suggestion: What
...ration level can be risen during study .What is more, it is helpful way to grab some...
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Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...aramount ethical value about worldliness .for illustration, bountiful sports and g...
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Line 5, column 679, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rt enlightment regarding to coordination , cooperation , decision making and leade...
^^
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Suggestion: ,
... regarding to coordination , cooperation , decision making and leadership skill wh...
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Line 5, column 793, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... immense significant in well personality .So, students must do free time activitie...
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Suggestion: So
...mmense significant in well personality .So, students must do free time activities....
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Suggestion: , the
...ee time activities. On the other hand,the predominant drawback of participating i...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... scholars, it sitbacks them from studies .it is evident, the pressure of study is ...
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Suggestion: Undeniably
...ctly proportional to level of education.Undeniably, tertiary students have to spend excess...
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Suggestion: ,
... their time schedule would be fluctuated ,which put adverse effect on study perfor...
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Suggestion: .
... put adverse effect on study performance . To conclusion, although education is...
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Suggestion: ,
...t of life so students should focus on it , but other recreational activities also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, well, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74427480916 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21642768554 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671755725191 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 258.18150108 49.4020404114 523% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 376.25 106.682146367 353% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288078696147 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15305355237 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942524804965 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15305355237 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942524804965 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.4 13.0946893788 293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.98 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.