Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and, as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause? What could be done

Plenitude refers to bombardment of wanted or unwanted things depends on consumers' behaviour. Large corporations have deep pockets to market and promote products persistently. This essay will delve into problems this situation cause and gauge some solutions.

There are some problems associated with this working approach. The human species is born with greed. Invariably, smart corporations are better analysing this human psychology so much that they offer hefty discount on their products. Owing to it, many local or small business are struggling to compete with them. Even though, their products are of superior quality, these never get sold out. Secondly, things are omnipresent, inviting people to buy them. Life is fecund, so are the corporations, to push their limit to sell the product, not for their benevolent objective but to make corporation larger and to have monopoly in the market. Basically, it is trap for consumer to believe in brand's prestige and quality.

To tackle this problem, there are some possible solution. By all means, banning is not the solution. Although, in the past, government banned the ads promoting cigarette and alcohol consumption, they are not in same position in this case as there is nothing nasty on sale. Primarily, it is up to people who have to decide whether to accept these adverts or reject them completely. Moreover, subsidize or interest free loans by government would be a significant help for local small business person.

To conclude, this essay has highlighted the problems of this phenomenon such as: squeezing local business and having monopoly and presented some solution including rejecting completely and providing subsidized loan.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...of wanted or unwanted things depends on consumers behaviour. Large corporations have deep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79935878963 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9440751404 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261578564624 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719691764193 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532044863293 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150921610383 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321752171794 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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