Believe date of fee test and strongest individuals and team always succeed in sports other people think their success in sports depend on mental attitude discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people believe success in sports is mostly depend on body fit but, other people do not agree with this statement and think that achieved goals are depend on mentally strong and makes strategy. So, I discuss both sides and put my own Idea and example in the following paragraph.
To initiate with, each coin has two sides. First i talking only first side of the coin, there are a lot of games play into the sports is mostly involve our body and muscles completely fit and fine such as wrestling, boxing, robby and so on. For instance, basketball players are able to high jump and run fast needed and win the game.
On the other hand, not only physical fitness is more important than mental attitude, there are a lot of games into the sports that mostly people become achieved travels to their own skills such as communication, mind training, leadership, makes strategies. These types of skills are play an inevitable role in the badminton and chess. The strong example in these phenomenon, PV Sindhu came up with a convincing win over China's bingjiao and claimed the bronze medal in the women's singles badminton at the games. Beside this, Sindhu second olympic medal after the silver in the 2016 Rio games. So, she has a better game planning and follow the all their plans step by step and won bronze medal.
To sum up, my opinion on par with that all people should both types of skills are much necessary in the journey of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61328125 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27411864259 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6997087322 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166946389282 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529468143207 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748345587707 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108836717391 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870871036456 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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