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GRE Argument essay

As evidenced in the letter designated to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine, manned space flight is opined to be less favourable than unmanned space flight. However, there were some assumptions on which this opinion was premised, which will be looked into to determine if such an assertion is worthy or not.

Firstly, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites could be as a result of several factors not known to us.
That unmanned space flight is argued to be cost-effective and less dangerous does not in any way makes it advantageous over manned space flight. The gathering of information that is costly does not translate to a particular type of flight being unsuccessful.

Secondly, the recent success of an unmanned space flight does not expose us to any information as to whether the trip was a short or long one, so as to make an objective comparison with a manned space trip. An unmanned space trip being successful on the short-distance trip, for instance, does not automatically indicates that it will always be successful on all other distances of trips.

Thirdly, the fact that the unmanned space trip was successful does not mean that the cost and risk of a manned space trip are overly associated with sending men and women into space.

Additionally, that the unmanned space flight was successful is not a green light for the investment of resources in unmanned space flight. This is largely because the success of the trip at a particular point in time might not translate to n automatic success every time. For example, in 2021, a space trip of the same calculated costs and risk was made in the first month (January) and the third month (March). The space trip for January was a landmark and obviously, it inspired the trip for March, unfortunately, the second trip was unsuccessful. This shows that there are more to a success of a space flight trip than just focusing on if it is manned or unmanned.

Conclusively, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites does not suggest that we should direct all our resources to unmanned space flights. Thereby, this argument is misleading and could result in regrets if acted upon.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lar type of flight being unsuccessful. Secondly, the recent success of an unman...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...t does not expose us to any information as to whether the trip was a short or long one, so as...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ether the trip was a short or long one, so as to make an objective comparison with a man...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'indicate'
Suggestion: indicate
...p, for instance, does not automatically indicates that it will always be successful on al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8835978836 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78685842536 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441798941799 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5999273783 57.8364921388 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.066666667 119.503703932 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 5.70786347227 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00924079418388 0.218282227539 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00730950578897 0.0743258471296 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027349666329 0.0701772020484 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00813863993199 0.128457276422 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199355150336 0.0628817314937 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments