Through out the world there are various television channels which show the ongoing sports. Many people argue that the telecasting should to stopped as it shows a negative on teenagers in taking part in games. In my point of view I don't agree in reducing the shows which show various programs related to games.
On one side the continuous watching leads to visual problems and also reduces the social life especially in the youth. Now-a-days it is common to show case the sports since everyone cannot afford to attend the event in person. This makes youth to watch more instead of participating in other events. For instance, my brother likes to watch football but never shows interest in playing as it needs many players and a ground which is hard to find in a city. If even he have exam the day he prefers to watch as he could not miss the action and enjoyment.
On the other hand, viewers tend to follow their ideal in sports. In the way of maintaining fitness and also charities they perform. The most impact they make is in having healthy life. If we consider my ideal in cricket he always maintains perfect diet and stays claim without getting anger even other poke him. This helped me to start taking yoga classes to reduce temper that I have and also started eating only healthy food. Thus, it dhows huge impact on youth to focus on body and mind
To sum up, over watching leads to many consequences but the benefits overweigh them. I think that the viewing should not be reduced but as person we need set a time when to watch and to what extend we should watch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: Throughout
Through out the world there are various television ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ng part in games. In my point of view I dont agree in reducing the shows which show ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...h is hard to find in a city. If even he have exam the day he prefers to watch as he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51929824561 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25967636466 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5699547213 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105332452611 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336183193043 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390872715221 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584110938946 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327324526296 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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