Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think it is good for the world of sports, while others think it is negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, a rising number of companies sponsor popular sports around the world to promote their company name and products to more people. However, some people argue that it the most effective way of promoting business products or services among people, others point out that it is a bad practice. Before giving my opinion, I would discuss both views in further paragraphs.
To begin with, funding sports gives benefits to both parties. While, company gets a golden chance to access a wider number of audience and increase their sales, sports get an opportunity to use that money to develop infrastructure and help their new players financially. Also, sponsorship is a great way for sport teams of poor nations to fund their campaigns. Without it, many of these countries will not be able to send their teams to international events like Olympics, Asian games, etc. Through financial support, a sportsperson can also earn extra income. This encourages young people to take sports as their career.
On the flip side, sponsoring sports is not a full proof method to promote commercial goods. If the player or the team is unable to perform well, it can badly affect the sales. A larger damage could be faced by the company if players are involved in illegal things such as drugs and gambling. Furthermore, sports is not a platform to advertise products like liquor, as it may damage the reputation of player or the team.
All in all, supporting sports financially is a vast industry these days. It has given many advantages to both packs. Demerits associated with this field are negligible. I believe that it the duty of players to maintain the quality of the game without involving themselves in scandals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rs point out that it is a bad practice. Before giving my opinion I would discuss both ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98251748252 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66680547384 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0650345064 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25473122473 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690319515073 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553982597758 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13600710648 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391938145694 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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