You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to you friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should:
- Say what you enjoyed about the dinner
- Describe how you feel about his/her family
- Invite your friend and his/her family to you place.
Dear Jini,
I am fine and hope that you are doing well. It has been just a week that we have met but it feels like a year. I am writing to thank you for the having me at your place and can't express how much I have enjoyed it
It's really thoughtful of Aunt Lucy to have remembered my favorite cuisine. I have never ever had such palatable home-cooked Chinese food in my life. I am so thankful to her for putting so much effort and time into cooking delicious garlic chicken and fried rice along with the spring rolls, for me. I loved it so much.
I want to tell you that I received so much warmth and love from your family, that it actually reminded me of my parents back in Punjab. Initially, I was feeling a bit shy, but then your mom and dad made me very comfortable by cracking jokes with me. Your dad certainly has a great sense of humor and I must say that not even for a single second I didn't feel as if I wasn’t at my home.
Why don't we catch up on Sunday at my place? My family will be glad to meet you.
Keep in touch and see you soon.
Best regards
Ishween kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jini, I am fine and hope that you are doing we...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...you for the having me at your place and cant express how much I have enjoyed it It...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cant express how much I have enjoyed it Its really thoughtful of Aunt Lucy to ha...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...le home-cooked Chinese food in my life. I am so thankful to her for putting so mu...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce along with the spring rolls, for me. I loved it so much. I want to tell you ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng rolls, for me. I loved it so much. I want to tell you that I received so muc...
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Line 4, column 348, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...say that not even for a single second I didnt feel as if I wasn’t at my home. Why do...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nt feel as if I wasn’t at my home. Why dont we catch up on Sunday at my place? My f...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in touch and see you soon. Best regards Ishween kaur
^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you soon. Best regards Ishween kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, second, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01851851852 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10745297093 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662037037037 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6847521951 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7692307692 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20542965151 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696955244824 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558194350448 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12141800019 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587832841572 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.74 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.