There is an ongoing debate regarding information. A group of individuals believes that tabloids are the media to take and get knowledge. However, others are of the view that the net is a good platform. Therefore, both views will be discussed before commencing my opinion.
Examing the former view, the foremost argument put forward by the proponents is that we get information in our vernacular language therefore, any person can read news which will boom their knowledge and awareness about the world. An example is that most old age people are only read the local language and they do not run the electric gadget. Moreover, reading newspapers is a better way because a person could concentrate on getting information.
On the contrary, those in favor of the latter opinion have their own arguments. To begin with, they claim that the world wide web is more convenient for getting information where pupils are searching for any news on their mobile phones and getting updated but person must have an internet connection.
An apt example is that in this cutting-edge no one have time to read a newspaper. however, most of the youth read current affairs on the internet.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would support the second view. this is because of getting information on the internet is time-saving so we can read the information on our leisure time.
- It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98695652174 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73963073416 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3841880325 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2307692308 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228378083378 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779370541385 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475488652275 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12019492384 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625984657201 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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