Nowadays, apart from social media, video games, sports are the most well-known genre of entertainment. Hence, there are a lot of presumptions about this category. Many people believe that team sports such as football or basketball bring more advantages to players. However, others think that individual sport like swimming or tennis is much more beneficial for athletes. In my opinion, both types of sports have their perks and exert an equal benefit to players.
First of all, playing in a team help people to develop collaboration skill because teamwork is a highly vital soft skill that everyone must have not only in daily working life but also in a team sport. For instance, If a football team has a personal style footballer who is not communicating with his teammates by non-verbal gestures, then his team has a high chance of losing the match regardless of the weak or strong components they face. Furthermore, participate in a team help to resolve problems and conflicts since a team resemble many players with different personalities. As a result, there would be at least one time of disagreement due to differences in mindset or leadership. For example, if a conflict happens in a group, every member should recognise the nature of the problem and find the resolution quickly. Otherwise, Arguments and fights may occur, disrupting the game.
On the other hand, individual sports focus on athletes' mental health and physical fitness because there is just a contestant on the playfield dealing with rivals. Unlike team sport, besides physical flexibility and power, the mentality is another crucial aspect that a competitor must bear in mind. For example, if a contestant has a weak mental condition, no matter how strong he is, there would be a possibility of losing the game if he thinks the competitor is more skilful than him. Every action he made is responsible for the result of a match, so that an athlete must fully develop muscle strength as well as a stable will. Moreover, without teammates and sometimes even without a coach, they are forced to generate independent thinking. Participants have to think quickly since it is on their own and no one will come there to save the day.
In conclusion, every kind of sport has its perks and properties. Many people would support team sport because it helps them to socialise with teammates and gain teamwork skills. Others would prefer personal style sport so that they could balance the physical and metal elements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01061007958 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76391554701 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583554376658 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2912240965 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.944444444 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256416917342 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717213804388 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781134368823 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151628539097 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836556310618 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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