Some people think that it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams e.g football. However, some people think that it is more beneficial to play individual sports e.g tennis and swimming. Discuss both views and give your opinion
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that should sports activities like football playing with teams are highly benefical as compare to individual sports or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of the topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who argue that playing with teams is highly effective for an individual. They strengthen their view point by claiming that players acquire knowledge about different things. A good illustration of this is if players participate in sports such as, soccer they are able to learnt qualities like co-operation, leadership and most important is coordination. Playing hockey, cricket would be the perfect epitome of this.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who reckon that it is good for an individual to take part in sports without any team. For example, swimming as well as tennis. To make their view point convincing they claim that individual sports provide great assistance to develop self esteem because, in such kind of activities player will not depend upon other. As a result, he prepare his personal time schedule for practice and do practice of its own and adopt voluminous techniques to achieve success which were suitable for his.
To make it crown, weighing both the options, it is concluded that there is no single conclusion of this topic still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Nodoubt, playing with teams helps to develop overall personality of an individual but, on other hand, individual sports also assist to develop self confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prepares'.
Suggestion: prepares
... not depend upon other. As a result, he prepare his personal time schedule for practice...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07028753994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75963633247 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7245355485 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189815442805 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598648243567 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583924398545 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11736623092 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183042613035 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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