In business education and government it is always appropriate to remain skeptical of new leaders until those leaders show that they are worthy of trust Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In devel

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
.../ organization. They are like the leader ants whom other ants follow. If they ma...
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...ion. They are like the leader ants whom other ants follow. If they make one wron...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...know what the new leaders are capable of , whether they can be trusted with leadin...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...state elections, do you vote randomly ? or do you vote for someone whose work you ...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...as a leader who can be trusted with the nations growth. Hence, it is important for lead...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...t might lead to the country’s/business’s failure or loss but sometimes when you d...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: don't
... failure or loss but sometimes when you dont have any other option in cases such as ...
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Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...he association expect for the new leader , its okay to trust them and hope for the...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...association expect for the new leader , its okay to trust them and hope for the bes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51319648094 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61989253048 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489736070381 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3933728649 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5294117647 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294154646476 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103759508524 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780791515309 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187035641279 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563463254065 0.0667264976115 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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