talk about your dream.
Everyone certainly has their dreams. When we were a child, girls would like to become beautiful princesses lived in a castle, boys would like to become a spider-man, iron man, etc. We had crazy dreams. But, everything has changed from time to time, and our dreams are similar. When we grew up, almost all of our dreams become smaller and smaller. We have to think about many things, and we do not have time to keep chasing our dreams. Many people even do not have a dream when they are adults. They just want to earn so much money. Their dreams are far away. A couple of people are still on their dream-seeking trail. When I was a child, I had many dreams, one of them is to become a teacher. Until now, I still want to be a special teacher. I want to help students that are disadvantaged children. It is so difficult. My mom does not want me to teach them. I am not sure that I can become a teacher as I like. But, until the moment, that is my dream.
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| 2023-03-02 | giahieu123 | 56 | view |
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| 2021-11-24 | Đặng Thị Trà My | view | |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1847826087 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32710258202 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0273704509 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 45.2941176471 112.824112599 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8235294118 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 5.23603664747 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119949306669 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408769694654 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517149912173 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119949306669 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 13.2329268293 28% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.3012195122 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.78 11.4140731707 51% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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