I think it is an essential topic to discuss because it takes up a lot of room in our modern lives.
On one hand, some people argue the idea that computers have made our life complex while others oppose this claim and believe that computers have made our life easier.
In my point of view, I would agree that computers have shown to be the greatest age's assistance.
I feel this way for several causes, which I will explore in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the rapid of technology has been a major part of human life, and computers nowadays play a paramount role in our modern life. Computers help people to get in contact easily than they do before, by using social media platforms such as zoom and Skype, especially for those who live far away from their families or in some emergencies.
For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic, in some countries such as China; the government imposed on citizens to stay in their homes and prevented them from visiting, hence most people spent the majority of their time on their computers and I think it is quite clear how computers mitigate the impacts of quarantine.
Not only that but also, it is well-known that computers have an important impact on large companies and government institutions. Every company nowadays uses computers to store data and make different kinds of operations, which would save time and effort.
Furthermore, computers are extremely valuable for students who need to research. Students just use internet access and look for the information they need, then they manage their ideas and typing the research on their computers instead of going to the library and spend a lot of time there.
From what I have deliberated, I cannot imagine life without computers even if some people find that computers make our life inconvenient due to technological advancement is nearly impossible without computers.
I reckon that computers help us to stay in touch with others, make daily tasks in companies quickly and broaden our knowledge.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- If you could go back to some time and place in the past when and where would you go Why Use specific reasons and details to support your choice 87
- Television does not give people an accurate view of human nature 93
- Do you agree or disagree Although technology had made communication easier there are still as many misunderstandings among people as there were in the past 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Today s media TV Newspapers magazines for example offer a lot of information on many topics but people don t use this information to really learn something thoroughly and in depth Use specific reasons 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ll explore in the subsequent paragraphs . To begin with, with the rapid of techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, then, well, while, for example, i feel, i reckon, i think, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87577639752 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54160522397 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0184996097 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259482976807 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911287941055 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104569025258 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118324557949 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118214574685 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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