Some people believe that children should do sports so that they will grow up as healthy adults, but others feel sports are just about enjoying yourself.
Discuss these both views and give your own opinion.
Although many would argue that sports should be used for the purpose of enjoyment nothing else; however, I think that sporting activities are vital for the growth of children on behalf of their mental as well as physical health. This essay will discuss my thoughts on the above topic.
First and foremost, whether playing indoor or outdoor, these games are essential for the development of child. To play these competitive games, one needs the co-ordination of body and brain. Owing to this, flourishing of health occurs in younger ones. Not only these are helpful for mental healthiness but physically also. As a result, children are compelled to take healthy diet to cope against the tiredness and recovery of the body after playing these physical based activities. For instance, a survey included by Indian Health ministry shows that the youth who tend to play games has high bone density than the other ones who do not. Moreover, these are supportive in developing some character building values such as discipline and team-work in a child. Needless to say, these benefits stand in a good stead.
On the contrary, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the alarming one is that taking part in sports need huge amount of time. Nowadays, studies are hectic and needs a lot of concentration to focus on it. Due to this, many youngsters take these exercises as a hobby not like the profession they want to pursue. Besides, some games need expensive equipment to play them. For example, people of country like India, where poverty ratio is very high cannot afford to buy such tools. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of sports are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07098765432 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67639934867 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.945703155 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164727679986 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443119799876 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312970604519 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975175305731 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327283632389 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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