Nowdays, we concious about both of the national and international news.But what is the most effective method for dealing with this argument.Some people believe that focous on their country's news is more lucrative instead of international news.In this essay i will discuss both of this argument and draw a conclusion.
firstly, international news is much more complicated issue rather than national news or local news.People often have this opinion because Most of the people have little bit of idea about international History, Diplomacy, Geography and other international politics related circumstances.For instance most of the people of Bangladesh awkward about international affairs.For that reason they can not understand international news and it;s value.Subsequently for this reason major proportion of people can not understand international news and it's precise meaning of influence in the world. If international news can hold any meaning as same as like indigenous news, then obviously people will put much more attention in international or word wide news.
One the other hand there is a common believe that own country's news and other news related stuff inevitably related with international news.The main reason for believing this is that international multiple occarences have deep influence in native or indigenous news.Take US international policy as an example .US political decisions and amendment can change the situation in Iraq, Afganisthan and other countries where ware is existing with Nato and other militia groups.The example scrunize that people have to emphesise international news as same as like news in their country.As a result they can understand their own political news and other kind of country's crucial news easily.News will be much more interesting for people.
In conclusion although it is a common think that awareness about focousing own country news is important rather than international news.I believe, international news is more important for people than their own country's news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61237785016 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20649917206 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498371335505 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.059074565 49.4020404114 441% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.6 106.682146367 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.4 20.7667163134 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.8 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445370587222 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.298136571484 0.084324248473 354% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616568849648 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321993642373 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536708002857 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.36 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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