The diagram depicts the process of manufacturing canned pears.
Overall, there are fourteen stages contributing to the production of this type of canned fruit, starting with choosing suitable pears and ending with the distribution of canned products.
First and foremost, pears will be hand-picked. Next, it will be transported to another place dedicated to washing. After this stage, it will be carefully checked to ensure quality. The chosen ones will then go through a stage called cold storing before being weighed and graded. When this stage has finished, the core of those will be removed and they will be sliced afterward.
When the pears have been cut into slices, these pieces of fruits will be put into cans for sealing. Subsequently, cooking and sterilizing will happen to enhance the taste and flavor of the products. Next, they will be labeled and the result is the canned fruits of pears. These packed products will then be store in the storage before being dispatched for further distribution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61516380488 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5409204269 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123970441825 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599296740491 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645791627045 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115567885308 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637421107645 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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