Some parents choose to send their children to private schools. Do the advantages of private schools outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowdays, A major proportion of parents send their children to non government schools. For many people it is the best way in order to ensure top eduacation for children. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay i will discuss some of the reasons why some parents choose to send their children to private schools and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of sending children to private educational institutions. One of the main positive thing is that non government schools commited to provide best service for children. There is a severe competition always existing among the privet or non government schools. By this i mean antagonism between private schools along with childrens encourage parents to select private schools for theit childrens. For example, most of the gardians prefer private school for their children in Dhaka.According to their opinion private school education is in the culminated position without any dawdle and competition is a common thing in this institutions. It can make you more affirm in this decision that privet schools are appropriate for children education.
Secendly, Privet schools appoint teachers with well qualification and those schools free from corruption. For instance, In Kolkata privet schools ensure teachers who completed their study from English medium background and from renowned institutions.In addition, because of ultra qualified teachers nowdays in private schools parents deviate their mind to send their children to privet school altercation of government schools.
Turning to the other side of the argument is that Privet schools are costly. Impossible to bear the cost for poor and middle class parents. Let's use Bangladesh as an example. Most of the parents unable to spent plethora of money for the privet school tutions. As a result, they can not send their children to private schools.
Another issue is that conventionally privet schools conduct in a small area or in a house. In other word those authorities are reluctant to manage expanded or large campus for childrens. This often leads to be shrinking the ability of sports and extra curriculam activities for children.
All things considered, you need to weigh up the pros of best education, qualified teachers and cons of high expenditure and tiny size campus.I believe the benefits in terms of eventually outweigh any negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2912371134 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82462351131 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512886597938 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9611305869 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7619047619 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467768628827 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137189758641 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126900382178 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231467942671 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141835198068 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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