The diagram shows that how a university's sports centre looks in the present time and the changes will see in the sports centre after redevelopment.
Overall, in the present time university sport centre are build in small area but in future it will be expand and new facilities will be build in centre.
To begin with, In recent time the campus sports centre are looks like square box. The entrence gate is in the south driection and reception area is infront of entrence. The 25 m pool is immedately back of reception. The pool is covering by three different area such as changing room and seating are in the west and east of pool respectively and gym is also in north side. Outdoor courts are also avaiable either side of sports center.
Moreover, in future sports center is expand and outdoor courts will demolish from both sides. The reception area is on the same place but sports shop and cafe will build in the both side of extrance gate. Although changing room, seating and pool will not changed, gym will be expand in future. The new two changing rooms will be construct next to the cafe and sports shop in the right and laft coner. In the east side of centre two dance stuidos will be build. In the north west corner new leisure pool will be convert in upcoming time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The diagram shows that how a universitys sports centre looks in the ...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m pool is immedately back of reception. The pool is covering by three different are...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...covering by three different area such as changing room and seating are in the wes...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
... Moreover, in future sports center is expand and outdoor courts will demolish from b...
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Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...hanging room, seating and pool will not changed, gym will be expand in future. The new ...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ol will not changed, gym will be expand in future. The new two changing rooms will be con...
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Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... next to the cafe and sports shop in the right and laft coner. In the east side o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25027458038 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5330645089 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2307692308 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156855016897 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640629866453 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059588932368 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123308669017 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677365775376 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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