No one can deny, businessmen spend a huge amount on Sportsmans because they know that today sports are the best source for marketing as well as for investment. So, the inclusion of association in sports are rapidly rais. It is a true statement, businesses are also involved in this field alongside owners of large organizations give the money prizes to sportsmen. I will discuss the positive side of these changes in sports as well as I will give the appropriate reason, why I held this point.
To commence with, In the whole world, sports events also organized an extremely huge level such an Olympic, Asian games events, Australian games and many more. An ample of, talented players are do participate in this event. When enterprises tycoons invest the money in the game events as well as the highly successful companies choose the extremely talented player as the brand ambassador of their company and it is a great opportunity for sportspeople. Secondly, organizations also organized on the national level or international sports events in these matches those companies select the best players and purchase those players in extremely huge amounts. Take India as an example. Every year, IPL cricket matches are organized in India. In these matches, businessmen and a lot of celebrities made their own teams and they select the played by their own choice but they must be given the huge amount to that player for play in their team. This is immensely beneficial for sportsperson as well as for the future.
Moreover, it is a motivation for that player who is select in the team then they do more and more hard work for bright future instead of it also do work as an inspiration for that player who plays at a small level. One of the major positive aspects of this change is that, when organizations are involved in sports, they give several amenities to players. This change also plays an essential role in order to the growth of this field.
To conclude, the involvement of business in the games is a positive change. It provided numerous facilities to players as well as for the development of games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85595567867 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73818476155 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495844875346 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9724238261 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194907643754 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654232325579 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483937303507 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137810346335 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424558407762 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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