In some areas of the US, a “curfew” is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge or experience.
Adolescence is the most crucial period of human life, which families and society must protect. To do this, some parts of the US have a policy called "curfew" to limit the young's time of going out at night. In my opinion, this is a powerful method to contribute to a sustainable and safe society.
Firstly, it is undoubted that today the crime rate is rapidly increasing in many countries, in which the number of criminals at puberty age also rises sharply. This problem can be explained by two factors related to a teen's characteristics, including vulnerability and easy temptation. Indeed, the puberty period is when a child is transformed into an adult in both mental and physical development. In this stage, teenagers tend to like becoming independent from their parents, whereas they are not cognitively developed to ensure their behaviors are proper. Thus, they are likely to be attracted by social evils, such as drugs, wine, and even illegal actions. This problem leads to many communities having to appeal to families to have adequate methods to supervise their children's free time to protect them from harmful activities, especially at night.
Secondly, teenagers are also the objective of many criminal cases. An investigation report has also shown that many girl teens are attacked when going out alone due to sex and property targets. In puberty progress, the youth psychologically tend to establish themselves as adults, even rebelling against their parent's instructions. For example, they would like to wear expensive jewelry, come to pubs, bars, or join a social network group of adults. These actions easily make them become victims of offense organizations. It is a fact that the instructions and warnings in families and schools about these threats in society are sometimes ineffective. Many cases happen when teenagers break school rules or their family's advice to put themselves into victims of criminals. Again, this is evidence to confirm that a stricter law needs to be enacted to help puberty people avoid dangers.
In conclusion, teenagers are easily influenced by harmful societal activities, and it is necessary to have feasible solutions to protect them. Many countries applied laws to limit the time of going out at night for the youth, and the "curfew" in the US is typical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1914893617 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99308373571 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579787234043 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7632393316 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.736842105 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195694008547 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529706081229 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442281106089 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127508519301 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348587181224 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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