You have seen an advertisement for a parttime volunteer to work with out pay for an organisation that helps local children. You would like to do this work
Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter
Say why you are interested in this type of work
Explain why you think you are suitable
Give details of when you could do this work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter for a part-time volunteer position at JW Punjabi Charity to help local Indian kids. I very interested in this work because I love to be with kids. Also, I have no child of my own and playing with kids is relax for me.
In India I help in Gurdwara for 12 years. I help on every Sunday back home for 5 hours. In 2019 I help the team in Gurdwara who was helping 16 homeless kids. I provide reference information for your checking. Reference Information: Mr. Jaspal Bhatti (Head at Gurdwara, Chandigarh), Phone: 0091-844-1111111.
Sir, I am suitable because I have experience with kids and my house is Condi Street in Brampton, just 2 streets away from your office. Also I can come to work on Sunday anytime from 6.30am to 8.00pm for 2 to 4 hours.
Kindly give me a chance to help the local India kids. I am waiting to hear from you.
Regards,
Manjeet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter for a part-time...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
...hild of my own and playing with kids is relax for me. In India I help in Gurdwara f...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., just 2 streets away from your office. Also I can come to work on Sunday anytime fr...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am waiting to hear from you. Regards, Manjeet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43113772455 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63238872519 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1566124136 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.9230769231 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254307151279 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819169538001 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495307001087 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142775782361 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671090140764 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.