The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013
The tables illustrate airline tickets’ fee of the flight between Sydney and Melbourne in Australia, over a couple of weeks in 2013. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the price on weekends and Monday outnumbered that on weekdays. Noticeably, in week 1, the figure on Monday and Friday dominated the fare market in all categories.
In particular, when it comes to the flight from Sydney to Melbourne, the figure on Monday ranked the top at $80 in week 1 and was at $50 in week 2, followed by around $35 on two following days in both weeks. The cost increased slightly to $40 on Thursday before significantly rising to roughly $75 on the next day. The graph witnessed a considerable decrease of about $25 on Sunday.
Meanwhile, regarding the flight from Melbourne to Sydney, the prices on Monday stood at $60 and $40 in week 1 and 2 respectively. Afterwards, the number shared the equal fee of around $35 in the next three days, which constantly accounted for the lowest cost. The chart experienced a dramatic growth to $80 and $60 on Friday, which consecutively constituted the highest score. After that, the fare declined to $60 in week 1 and $50 in week 2, then finished at the same number of $50 on Sunday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52073732719 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8738843541 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52534562212 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9126115646 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241952924584 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894869913789 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112794056573 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162489487283 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076706163344 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.