The provided charts illustrate details about how much money is spent on airline tickets from Sydney to Melbourne and vice versa, during a period of two weeks in 2013
Overall it is obvious that in 2013, the spending on airline tickets between Melbourne and Sydney was various on every day of the week. Moreover, the price of tickets was higher on weekends than on weekdays.
A quick glance at the first chart reveals that the amount of money spent on tickets of the first week Monday was the highest at $80, then witnessed a remarkable drop of $30 in week 2. Furthermore, there was no changes in the cost on the other days of the week. On Tuesday, Wednesday people spent lower price at $35 and paid $5 more on Thursday. On weekends, the prices were more expensive varied around 50 to $75.
Turning to other set of data, the tickets cost on Monday of Week 1 was $60, followed an enormous decrease to $40 on the following week. Besides, from Tuesday to Thursday on 2 week, there was a constant trend of ticket spending at approximately $35. The second chart underwent a sharp leap on Friday of the two weeks, at 80$ and $60, respectively. Additionally, the costs declined to $60 in week 1 and $50 in week 2 on Saturday and eventually finished at the same figure of $50 on Sunday.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y people spent lower price at 5 and paid more on Thursday. On weekends, the price...
^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... Besides, from Tuesday to Thursday on 2 week, there was a constant trend of ticket s...
^^^^
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
...arp leap on Friday of the two weeks, at 80$ and 0, respectively. Additionally, the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, moreover, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43965517241 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58734170505 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3757266872 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300146702425 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105841571787 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108264532914 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216907877613 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966497671932 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y people spent lower price at 5 and paid more on Thursday. On weekends, the price...
^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... Besides, from Tuesday to Thursday on 2 week, there was a constant trend of ticket s...
^^^^
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
...arp leap on Friday of the two weeks, at 80$ and 0, respectively. Additionally, the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, moreover, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43965517241 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58734170505 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3757266872 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300146702425 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105841571787 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108264532914 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216907877613 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966497671932 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.