Do you think that an ageing society will disappear? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more old people in society?
These days, elder people are prone to large number of diseases due to unhealthy food or environment. There are many reasons that every day great numbers of older people die. But, I believe that its really important to have elders in society for betterment of people.
In this contemporary world, age of masses is keep on decreasing every year especially old age ones. Reason for this is the way of living, most people today are having unhealthy diet each day which is sprayed with pesticides or chemicals. Moreover, environment pollution also contributes to lesser age of death. For instance, pollution level in Delhi has been spiked from standard level causing respiratory or lungs problems. As a result, due to old age, they are more vulnerable to such conditions.
However, elder people have significant role in our lives, as, they are the roots of our living. Because, they help us to understand the meaning of life, way of living, bring integrity in family and connect us to our ancestors. Moreover, its always blessful to have some elders in family to guide us right path. For example, Grandmother or grandfather are the ones, with whom we are more comfortable than own parents and give us more love and blessing than anyone else. Thus, It is essential to have aged people for better society.
In conclusion, it is true that age of people are decreasing and causing the disappearance of elder people from our families. It must be the result of bad diet and unhealthy living plan. Yet, it is really important to take good care of our elder family members for the survival of cultural and morals.
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...terment of people. In this contemporary world, age of masses is keep on decreasi...
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... connect us to our ancestors. Moreover, its always blessful to have some elders in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83272727273 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61892918626 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5804929932 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182484735401 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061932056522 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052061045397 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106854385534 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194747912353 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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