Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the following question “Why do you want to become a student of Foreign Language School for The Gifted?
In these days and ages, it is becoming common for students including me to join the application to take the entrance exam to a foreign language school including me. This essay will explain the benefits of a foreign language school for the gifted that make me want to apply and become a student in this school.
First, studying at a foreign language school will help me improve my foreign language skills. The lectures taught here will focus on foreign language subjects and improve my chances of being employed in high-paying (well-paid) jobs upon graduation. With highly qualified teachers domestic and foreign teachers, my ability to communicate in foreign languages will be further enhanced and become a solid foundation when I apply for a job or study abroad.
Second, the foreign language school organizes a lot of interesting activities and creates opportunities to visit, exchange, and study abroad. Organizing these activities can not only help improve communication in foreign languages, but it also helps to increase solidarity when working in groups, as well as improving independence.
To sum up, attending a foreign language specialist for gifted students will help me improve my knowledge and ability to apply for good jobs and lead to a better life in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16346153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8324612157 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.116000685 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256180519921 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137286217408 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840855340223 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169683392756 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814106308775 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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