A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortage, and what could be done to tackle the problem?
In our fast-paced society, despite the technological advances, there still exist some countries that have water crisis. They don’t have enough water for daily uses such as household chores, health adaptation or agriculture. In my opinion, the issues still occur because of various reasons and the writing below will discuss about both natural effects and human causes.
First of all, the countries with water crisis are in the area with extreme environment and the local residents are naturally lack of water due to weather condition. In other words, these locations are near the sun so the high temperature leads to the lack of precipitation and annual droughts. In consequence, stream flow starts to diminish and causes the shortage of water. As a result, these countries do not have enough water for daily uses in a long period of time. According to recent research, about 10 percent of global population or 40 percent of desert residents do not have access to safe water resources and it caused thousands of children die daily. In brief, nature is one of the reasons to water crisis but other countries should take these problems under consideration and solve the global issues.
On the other hand, the lack of clean water is because of the irresponsibility of a proportion of the global citizens. Specifically, some people are still wasting water with unconscious habits. For example, making a cotton T-shirt costs gallons of water that can be used by a single person for days. Meanwhile, we misuse a large number of clothes and equipment without realizing the natural resources that had taken part in the manufacture process. Furthermore, various industries are willing to contaminate water by dumping trash and chemicals directly to the water sources in order to utilize the annual incomes. They neglect the environmental threats and cause water crisis just for their personal purposes. Therefore, government should issue laws and penalties for these companies with the purpose of eliminating water problems.
Summarily, water crisis has always been a serious problem to many countries across the globe; therefore, global citizens should together come up with solutions and solve this issue. For example, government can supply purified water for extreme area or establish environmental organization in order to help people with difficult situation or to raise the citizens awareness about environment.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30208333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79314326621 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565104166667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6438803578 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.111111111 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.102502254538 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606451482557 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19280651943 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485683488073 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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