a. Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, it is commonly thought that animal tests can place a great value on healthcare and human safety. However, many people possibly argue that testing on animals tends to exert massive pressure on both mental and physical animal health. I support the view that tested animals can become vulnerable and stressed after being researched.
On the one hand, there are several benefits that humans get from animal testing. Firstly, the major advantage is that it is probably better for animals to suffer than for humans to die. That is to say, in some unfortunate cases, the use of new drugs containing live attenuated viruses can pose a severe threat if someone is weakened by illness with an unfavorable immune system, especially the elderly or children whose bodies tend to be unable to restrict the impact of viruses and being attacked seriously by them. Therefore, thanks to animals, many people get rid of being infected with viruses or bacteria from new drugs and effectively enhance human safety. Secondly, animals are used in tons of science research, leading to new treatments that can save millions of lives. To be precise, animal testing can not only impose the risk of suffering endangered viruses but also boost opportunities of figuring out a large number of vaccines or pills being verified through them.
On the other hand, it is mainly believed that testing on animal bodies can have detrimental effects on their normal life. That is mainly because animals frequently suffer extreme pains, leading to many of them being killed during testing and humans have no right to conduct experiments on animals. Having said that, animals being captured in cages coming to the laboratory are injected with new drugs and researchers just focus on the statistics and the recorded numbers regardless of animal sickness or pains and in some situations, most of them can die of viruses or bacteria. It is notable that most people are careless and rash after doing experiments on animals and abandon them quickly when becoming totally useless.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that despite several advantages from doing animal’ tests, these acts should be banned and punished properly because the disadvantages present a danger to animal health both mentally and physically, resulting in morally wrong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 914, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lso boost opportunities of figuring out a large number of vaccines or pills being verified throug...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...physically, resulting in morally wrong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15649867374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56099662491 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572944297082 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5016659536 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321285309413 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113603558579 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423810899553 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200188288025 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284487538675 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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