A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food (frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?
Living in the information age, people have a tendency to depend on food which is delivered by restaurants and convenient stores, including frozen food and packaged meals. This means that individuals do not cook at home for their meals. There are both advantages and disadvantages for this way.
On the one hand, a growing body of research suggests that convenience food plays an integral part of individuals’ life. There are a few of reasons to explain why people have to utilize this way for their private life. To be more precise, those who rely on restaurants and convenience food can save their time and spend their entire time on working for their job. Besides that, people who struggle to cook at home can use this way to tackle their weakness immediately. Taking developed countries around the world, especially America as an example, individuals have a propensity to contain a plethora of frozen food and packaged meals in their refrigerator for every meal, even young people, especially those who are living alone, are more likely to happen this situation than other groups of ages.
On the other hand, there are obviously disadvantages for this way. First and foremost, individuals can not know how many calories they absorb into their body. This can lead to the ever-increasing obesity in people, especially countries which fast food can boost faster. Besides that, everyone can know that cooking at home for themselves is one of the most prominent ways to keep money by their side so those who booked meals to delivery to their house have to splurge their money. In fact, this way tend to be more likely to happen in developed countries than developing countries or underdeveloped countries. For instance, according the research of Amsterdam University in Holland, every year citizens in this country spend a huge sum of money on frozen food and packaged meals because they do not have enough time to cook so they decide to pay more money to buy restaurant-cooked food instead.
In conclusion, although cooking at home brings more advantages on their health than frozen food or packaged meals outside, individuals, nowadays, tend to use it for more convenient reasons in their life. On balance, I prefer to cook at home to control the food I absorb, prolong my life expectancy and keep my good health as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97186700767 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76227857986 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5475584897 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428537969298 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151824008445 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699235503741 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305726825481 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032581514192 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.