Task 2: Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, globalization has become a broad issue to the general public. it is sometimes thought that globalization has made the loss of national identities . However, according to some and I take the view that the growing business and cultural exchange between countries in the world is a positive trend. Discussed below are several reasons supporting my perspective.
On the one hand, many consider that national identities have been lost because of the development of business and culture. As evidence of this, they mention that minor languages have been died out. this is because English has become increasingly popular as the important language for business and tourism and global residents do not speak their own language. Moreover, they argue that traditional cultures have been lost significantly. To illustrate this point, it should be mentioned that lifestyle, traditional clothes and cuisines have been transformed in different ways due to adapting international taste.
On the other hand, there are several arguments in support of the idea that globalization has been brought a variety of positive developments . To begin with, one common reason which is used to prove is that cultural values have been exchanged positively and enriched through business and cultural exchange. this means that there are different cultures in one country and global citizens feel at home whenever they travel to. In addition, another point which helps people to find their argument quite convincing is that world economy has been developed rapidly thanks to international business. In other words, underdeveloped and developing countries are able to improve their poor economic situation by supporting endlessly from developed countries.
In conclusion, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people evaluate the impact of this issue, and it is still a controversial issue. As far as I am concerned, I put more highlight on the idea that there has been positive development from international business and cultural contact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44794952681 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96655426008 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7043909081 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238033079278 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768540396696 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634091939061 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143126582861 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452903640978 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.