All methods of learning are good . Pupils in educational institutions learn more about lessons with their teachers instead of another electronic gadgets. I partly agree with this. This essay will evaluate my view point in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, if learners do study from books with their teachers, they may get deeply knowledge about lessons. Firstly, deeply knowledge can be given by the instructor.Not only deeply knowledge they get but also they can clear their doubts . In addition to , schoolers can attain additional information about history, environment and humanity works also with their
academic subjects. Moreover, the lessons can be translated by the teachers in easy language which have difficult vocabulary.
However, way of study from electronic gadgets are also very useful . Schoolers can understand easily with the help of graphics , video's and pictures. Further more,some lessons or words are difficult which are unknown by coach also. Next ,the method of study from internet or television are quite interesting . As a consequence, every infant take intereste in their study and concentrate on it .
To conclude, although learning from books with their trainer is beneficial but the way of studying from internet or television is also quite interesting and useful. According to me , every juvenile tried to attain more knowledge from internet in addition to learning from books
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47247706422 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83593801829 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3017723737 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213046698254 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773372475486 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570335945841 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120870343266 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489991069713 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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