The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?
As there is an increase in the number of senior citizens, it has brought both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will outline the pros and cons of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, elderly people are beneficial for the job market since they are experienced in professions such as teaching, mentoring, or research which require people that are rich in experience. They can participate in these occupations, regardless of part-time or full-time. In addition, because there is a growing proportion of grown-up people who have to work overtime, thanks to healthy old parents, they will not be worried about taking care of their children. Moreover, the older generation is believed to preserve traditions. By telling historical stories to their grandchildren or sharing traditional meals’ recipes with the members, they will get a deeper insight into the country’s history and its cultural identity.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that the growing population of older people is putting great pressure on healthcare systems. The older they get, the easier they face chronic diseases including heart attacks, cancers, which require special medical treatments. As a result, the government might have to devote a larger budget to serve the demand. Another problem the government can face is that there will have an increase in the number of retired individuals claiming pensions, as well as a decline in the percentage of people who pay income taxes. This combination might affect government expenditures to other fields and the economy as a whole.
In conclusion, the ageing population is a positive trend, but it is also a negative one at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s also a negative one at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18450184502 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91886350562 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.028630856 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151006928739 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04875272693 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476921553159 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103794604551 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380534024053 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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