Hello John,
How are you and you're family doing. It's been a long time delay for our family outing since pandemic hit the world and now I'm so exited for our trip in next week. As we planned our picnic in the countryside we must carry some extra items for any emergency. We have already packed a tent, extra water bottles and some food which last for a long time. Could you able to bring cooking stuff such as cutleries, pans and gas to cook and you don't need to worry about our mini barbeque stand, I've already cleaned it up and I remember to load it in my back of the truck along with coal for fire on the day we leave. I hope we are not missing anything or it would be bit challenging for us to find anything in countryside and please let me know in advance if I'm missing anything to hop in my truck. One more thing I would like to add, hope you'll carry fuel cans for our trucks as we many not find any gas station near by countryside to way back home and please don't forget to bing ice box for beers, hope this is going to be a best trip ever.
See you soon John.
Regards
Drek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cks as we many not find any gas station near by countryside to way back home and please...
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...countryside to way back home and please dont forget to bing ice box for beers, hope ...
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...box for beers, hope this is going to be a best trip ever. See you soon John. ...
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... See you soon John. Regards Drek
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06944444444 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97549610897 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5718599183 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135259657394 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649260052703 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539786996691 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126883041343 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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