Admirable people

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Admirable people

The source of positive energy is necessary for our life. The most common method to create that energy is watching videos about who we admire, to motivate self-improvement. Admiration is not built in several days, it is whole progress that influencers construct through their respectable qualities.

Admirable people have several common qualities. Firstly, they have compassion and sympathy for others' sad situations. Many people cannot control their life due to poverty, disaster, or accident. A generous person is always willing to give them a chance and save their life. They are admirable for their human action. Secondly, optimistic people are also being admired, especially by negative ones. They are full of hope and they are always happy with the belief that good things will happen. They start a new day with a smile on their lips and they are willing to face challenges with all their power. Nothing can stop them from moving forwards in their life. Finally, admirable people are integrity. They are honest and obviously, they get all people's trust without any reason. They have strong moral principles to resist temptation and they will never make anyone feel disappointed about them.

To sum up, being an admirable person is not easy. There are many good qualities as well as many rules that a person should have to become others' admiration. Compassion, optimism, and integrity are just three qualities that admirable people usually share in common.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 867, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...ptation and they will never make anyone feel disappointed about them. To sum up, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19831223629 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58462153429 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616033755274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1220947696 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4444444444 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291333278292 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12211843991 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165684702997 0.0667982634062 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186700795904 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082640343268 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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