The pie charts illustrate the causes for which people migrated to and from the UK in 2007.
Overall, what stands out from the graphs is that due to the definite job most people chose migration in both cases, while the least emigration happened for formal study and no reason state for immigration.
Firstly, almost one-third of the total people decided to migrate for a definite job which was 30% in the case of immigration and only 1% less in terms of emigration. Secondly, for searching for a job 22% of the UK people emigrated from the UK, on the other hand, 12% of total immigration people came to the UK for looking a job. Moreover, 6% of immigrating people came to this place because of no reason state, while it was 3 times higher in the case of emigration.
Furthermore, because of formal study, 26% of migrating people entered the UK, however, only 4% went away for the same reason. In addition, for accompanying or join, the difference between the two cases was only 2% and 3% for the other cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61878453039 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57565244775 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1602744295 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.7142857143 5.23603664747 338% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198325159635 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116782652621 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843538899887 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16252653684 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792260215056 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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