The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The below illustration depicts the points among teams A, B and C for divergent season.
Overall, Team B seems to gain the highest points as per season, in the contrast, team C appears to achieve low points.
According to the chart, Team B got the highest points thought out the different seasons from 2002 to 2003 with the point of 82 and 60 respectively, whereas, in 2004 team b point suddenly dipped down to 43. In 2005 the team B again surged with the point of 55. Apart from that, Team A looks to achieve point of 5 in 2002 which rose up with little more rise with the point of 11 in 2003 and in 2004 it inclined suddenly to 35 number of points. Again it declined in 2005 with point of 8.
Moreover, Team C in 2002 got 10 points, following year it gained a rise with the points of 15. in addition, Team C points fluctuated in 2004 with number of 12 points. In 2005 team C trend dropped down suddenly to the number of point 5.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A look' or simply 'looks'?
Suggestion: A look; Looks
... the point of 55. Apart from that, Team A looks to achieve point of 5 in 2002 which ros...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...it gained a rise with the points of 15. in addition, Team C points fluctuated in 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21666666667 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33208299833 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.274968064 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930491237006 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530349635023 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345893511468 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768055296926 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161248436023 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.48 61.2550243902 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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