Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Supermarkets have dominant many countries in the world, whereas, many regional small grocery shops and other businesses are out of business. A number of people believe that the shutdown of community businesses will cause the disappearance of a local group of people. This essay completely agrees with the statement. I believe that the owners of supermarkets should select the area out of the city where they cannot affect the local business.
Supermarket items are normally expensive which cant be afforded by a middle-class person, however, residents prefer buying their daily base grocery stuff from small shops as they normally sell the items on credit as well. In addition, the items which are sold by supermarkets are higher in price comparing to the items sold on individual shops due to the fact that supermarkets price includes rentals and other expenses of the market as well. In the contrast, small local business shops maintain their margin profit merely low. For example, A big supermarket does not allow its customers to take groceries on credit, on the contrary, small local shop facilitates their customers to take groceries on credit
Apart from that, these supermarkets can attract the old and regular customers of the small community shops and this act definitely will affect small business owners. Nevertheless, supermarkets do also provide offers/sales on events which is a great tact to lure the customers from local businesses, and in this way, it is very difficult to survive for the local business community.
In conclusion, it's a moral duty of the local government to allow supermarkets to run their business in an area where it shall not affect the small business owners and then only the small business will be able to thrive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, whereas, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7787582056 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508710801394 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3968445998 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.6 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295695734359 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131506372934 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721646725233 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204636227116 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052434973018 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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