Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
A number of people believe that school shall include the art subject as mandatory for the students, while other argue that it is of no use for the children. I believe that it is not an essential subject to include as school should more focus on science and technology subjects rather then arts.
Art is a thing which can be a good hobby for children, however it should not be as a full time career for youngsters. schools ought to focus on science and technology subjects more than arts, as we all know the current era belongs to the technology and AI. For example, if students focus on technical subjects and if they create any macrobiotics which can assist disable person, so at least by this creativity we can assist our nation people to foster them towards the success and make them competent to race in a life.
On the other hand, many people believe that art is a great skill which can enhance the ability of person mind. Futhermore, In shcools all other subjects are taught as mendatory, however, art is considered as minor subject. There are number of people who have achieved the success on the basis of great art. For example, if a any youngster is not good at other subjects but he is well at art then he can make it as his career as Artist.
In conclusion, both views play a vital role on their places, but i believe that art should not be mandatory subject, rather schools should focus on more technical education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54826254826 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44850362841 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501930501931 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7787344848 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28575186663 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122453981552 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580071823141 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182416553594 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613644286061 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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