Today, many people think that governments should solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe that individuals should have this responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided whether the issues related to the environment should be addressed by government agencies or each citizen over the world. I would argue that whoever also takes responsibility for protecting the environment.
There are many reasons why some believe that authorities need to find solutions leading to decrease the rate of contamination. Firstly, many laws and penalties will be broken out to restrict these problems. This is because inhabitantshabitats are so scared and worry they will find themselves having to submit. For example, companies that emit harmful waste to rivers or soil not only pay fines but also punish their employeesprisoners. Similarly,Secondly, governments can launch campaigns to raise awareness of individuals. The reason is that these programs provide a great amount of accurate, efficient information or methods to have their own green lifestyle for dwellers. For instance, authorities contribute money to carry out experiments on samples.
On the other hand, I believe that whoever should take responsibility for actions causing pollution or negative problems. The most significant solution for this is that there is the dramatic efforts and cooperation of both individuals and authorities to achieve highest influence. For instance, inhabitants can contribute to protect the environment by simple ways such as reuse old things, reduce energy consumption, and recycle waste. In addition, if each person has not risen awkenness and responsibility, he or she will ignore surroundings and litter, releasing dangerous waste outside such as factories, companies, vehicles.
On the balance of evidence, from my point of view the government plays an important role in promulgating laws to prevent issues related to the environment but if problems are mitigated from foundation being individuals, environmental obstacles can be tackled effectively and correctly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73591549296 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43632206919 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651408450704 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6883889157 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172602919039 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522356095932 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474727707401 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996700152217 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285788207799 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.