An increasing number of people are now using the Internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together, while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided whether the online platforms are necessary to limit distance between relationships or make people more lonely. I would argue that social media plays a vital role in creating and connecting communications.
There are two main reasons why it could be believed that we have lost more and more social connections recently. Firstly, life is more complex and more occupied due to people not having much time to spend for their families or real relationships. For example, adolescents use a large number of hours each day for social media such as Facebook, Instagram, or Snapchat with online friends to chat and entertain together instead of meeting directly. Secondly, the Internet brought various negative effects on users if not having control correctly. Now people must face many dangerous threats such as cyber- bullying, fake news, tabloid, or fake friends. Consequently, users easily become hurt and disappointed, or even lose some communications in real life.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that the use of online platforms in life has more benefits than problems for users, especially to connect other people. To begin, some can detect with new friends appropriately about hobbies, target by using technology applications regardless of distance, time, or age. Therefore, users always could be able to share their emotion, knowledge, or talent easily whenever and then this is an effective way to enhance the development of communication and the online applications made people become more confident. My friends, for instance, can join some groups about studying languages to fix their mistakes following instructions to improve skills. Another fact to consider is the social media are great inventions of humans which assists members of families to express and share stories, working, or feeling so this improves their relationships together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tionships. For example, adolescents use a large number of hours each day for social media such as...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o chat and entertain together instead of meeting directly. Secondly, the Internet...
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Line 3, column 844, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and share stories, working, or feeling so this improves their relationships tog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36949152542 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8812881348 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654237288136 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5060995753 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242630411212 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749973917638 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465849953811 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160937053011 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251891322256 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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