“The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with
the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position,
describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and
explain how these examples shape your position.
Life is a great teacher if any one is didn’t even go to school or college those people also get trained in life school because schooling and institution are standardise module where we learn from others mistakes and great decisions , people prefer more to go to schools and institution to learn from great peoples research , Here the Promt is driving us to the fact which is “ the best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones “ , However , I am Strongly disagree to this point for this two reasons.
Firstly , A wise man is the man who know the both side of the coin - Life is a not easy as it is misguided from many people , Life is just life you have know the both part of life some time there will be situation when you will be feel jaunty / mirth/ glee ,but there will be definitely some dark zone where you feel sad , alone , solitude. For example - If a person only know to win the race which is a positive part of the game but what about the negative aspect where he don’t have the idea what is failure then there will be a sudden shock he get and due to that he might go to serious mind decease which can be only treated by psychiatrist . What I want to put here is a lucid picture of both the side of life and if this statement come from writers then I have to clarify that it will be the great mistake to not show the negative aspect than positive aspect.
Secondly , The Truth is some time more acrid than it look - you will never know the exact picture of the whole if you only considering the positive aspect from all point of view,For a instant, Lord Budha - in his childhood to the young age his father made a environment where there was only positivity in the whole world no one getting old and no one is dying everyone is living life cheerfully in exuberant way
But when Lord Budha was rushed in between one day to see the actual concept of livelihood then he realise the Truth is different than the presentation which made by his father, And he rushed to satisfy his curiosity to gain the uttermost truth of the life
He struggle all his life to convey the simple message of life that enjoy it as it is and make a way to know yourself - I am not saying follow Buddha but I am just giving you the idea what he felt when he first knew the truth , A truth is far more bitter some time so it is better that we knew it in the first place , from this life journey of others we will make some better decision in our life.
In both of the example which I have phrased in front of you are the commonly know examples and I have explicitly chose them to deliver cymessage in your mind that life is full of positivity and negativity which will comes first we don’t know but at-least by knowing them in the very beginning then will be save ourselves from Heart attack , coma & psychiatric treatment - Just kidding - it is better to know the both part to live life as it is and enjoy it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26126126126 5.05705443957 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22872637158 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43963963964 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 92.0 23.0359550562 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.908387986 60.3974514979 462% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.166666667 118.986275619 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 92.5 23.4991977007 394% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.21951772744 335% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184752716886 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984222992913 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289461384655 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100705533723 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04676374937 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.9 14.1392134831 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.98 48.8420337079 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 12.1743820225 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.61 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.8971910112 445% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.8 11.2143820225 346% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 11.7820224719 450% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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