Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades, it has been believed that job satisfaction is of greater importance than job security while a permanent job has been considered to be by far the most crucial. These views will be discussed below and from my perspectives, job satisfaction is way more vital.
On the one hand, a number of people claim that job security is highly appreciated owing to a fundamental reason being the stability of income. Having long-term jobs means that they can have a stable finance for their daily lives as they may know exactly their monthly salaries that they will receive, therefore, they will organize a detailed plan for financial balance about daily expenditure to save money for a rainy day. A permanent job can ensure that laborers are likely to maintain their material needs in sufficient ways without feeling a sense of worry.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that job satisfaction can bring more benefits than job security for several reasons. First of all, a large quantity of people find it greater pleasure to work, which boost their productivity, even if in long hours. This is because if they discover the contentment in their jobs, they might strive for it and fulfil their characteristics such as creativity, industriouness as well as experience to complete their tasks successfully,while a permanent job can just promise to have frequent income without making sure that laborers will not be forced or stressed in their working environment. Furthermore, job satisfaction can somehow reduce the unemployment rate. The more people find it satisfied to get their ideal jobs, the more people desire to make utmost efforts to purchase. This will lead to the fact that the working environment will be improved to a higher standard, also, individuals, especially those are in young ages will have opportunity to work and be recruited, even if in high-pressure job market.
In conclusion, job satisfaction plays a considerably significant role in enhancing productivity and getting a drem job for the workforce as compared to job security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10650887574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02048257899 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1850892126 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335039401166 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151842566694 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109274402365 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245246049419 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121468976946 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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